Peer Review for Coby Allred

This post is a peer review for a student in my section of class.

1. The name of the title and author for the project you reviewed

I reviewed Coby's video essay titled "Anwar al-Awlaki: Was His Death Justified?"

2. A working hyperlink to the project you reviewed

My comment

3. An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed

I chose to review Coby's project under the 're-design' option, mainly because I noticed one little thing and thought I should comment on it.

4. An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in other words, how did you help them make their work better?)

I suggested Coby include a physical list, some sort of works cited, along with his video or in the credits of his video so that one could fact check or even have the tools to learn more outside just the information he provided in the video.

5. An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback

I also suggested Coby re-design his title so that it is more catchy to his audience and thus more receptive. An easy title to remember is one that is more likely to be shared and passed on (both via the internet and through word of mouth).

6. One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from

Coby's project is undeniably professional. His speaking voice is wonderful!